William Muldoon Uses Long Copy

Як часта вы чулі, што лепш выкарыстоўваць кароткія копію або доўгі копію для інтэрнэт-маркетынгу. Некаторыя прыхільнікі выступаюць кароткі копію, Некаторыя выступаюць доўга і некаторыя спрабуюць нанесці залатую сярэдзіну. Здаецца, што ўсё мае сваё меркаванне, хоць. Адзін чалавек, які верыў у выкарыстанні доўгага копіі для продажу сваіх паслуг Уільям Малдун. Muldoon was the Greco-Roman World Wrestling Champion until he retired to become a personal trainer.

Muldoon’s first great success was training John L. Sullivan for a bout with Jake Kilrain, his most formidable opponent. Sullivan was hopelessly out of shape until Muldoon took over his training. Sullivan beat Kilrain in a bout lasting 75 rounds. Muldoon went on to train many athletes and celebrities.

The crowning jewel of his efforts was his health farm in Westchester County, New York. At Olympia, he trained celebrities who needed to get back into shape as well as politicians and business men dissipated by their duties. To attract people to his health camp, he hired Robertus Love, a writer and part time journalist to write advertisements to be placed in newspapers throughout the country.

The newspaper advertisements were written to look like news stories within the paper. Love began by asking the readers if they were experiencing a series of maladies. He then described the success that Muldoon had in curing these maladies with his unique training methods.

Muldoon was a proponent of medicine ball training, which is still popular among combat athletes today. He also put many of his charges through long walks and daily horse back riding. His nutrition regimen was odd but diet is more of a modern science.

Besides John L. Саліван, President Theodore Roosevelt sent several of the members of his government including Secretary of State Elihu Root to Muldoon’s Olympia. Due to overwork, the men were suffering from poor health. Muldoon was summoned to get them back into a healthy condition.

Muldoon was in his fifties at the time but did the same exercises that he recommended. He remained active in physical culture until his death at 81 гадоў. Here is a copy of one of the advertisements from the September 4, 1907 edition of the New Ulm Review. New Ulm Review Sept 4 1907

After reading this article/advertisement, I think compelling long copy will work but it has to be compelling. Love’s journalistic approach makes the copy seem more topical or important. If it had been poorly written or too repetitive, it would be easy to dismiss. I am much more likely to read a short post than a long post unless it is really good.

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